Wednesday, 20 March 2019

Powhiri Writing

We have been learning about being welcomed onto a Marae. Here is my writing work about powhiri.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Mylah. Well done for showing your understanding about the pōwhiri process. It is great to see that you organised each part into a paragraph per slide. You have shared some good information here about how a pōwhiri works.

    I want you to keep working on reading your work carefully before you show it to me and checking if it makes sense. At the moment you need quite a bit of help with this.

    It was good to see you using some punctuation and I could see you were trying hard with your spelling. Ka pai tō tuhituhi.

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  2. Thank you for the comment Miss Ireland, I will keep working on reading carefully and if it makes sense.

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