Get NZ Writing - poetry Over the past few weeks we have been part of the "Get NZ Writing" poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poems written across NZ! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems. Here are my poems.
Hi Mylah its me Jordyn and I really like your work. It is so amazing and really good. I think you could be a poet when you are older. It looks like it has taken you a really long time to write, its so good and I love the gem. It's my favourite out of the 2 of them but they are really cool and there is nothing you did wrong.😜 well done.I love how you used sticky words like transparent and treasure they are a good choice I used them in my poem about the gem too. They are pretty cool.
Hi Mylah. I loved reading your Get NZ Writing poems! My favourite one is the one about the key because it gets my imagination going. I liked the line, 'Sparkly smooth mysterious dust.' You definitely used good 'sticky' words to describe your items from the tin. Well done.
Hi Mylah its me Jordyn and I really like your work. It is so amazing and really good. I think you could be a poet when you are older. It looks like it has taken you a really long time to write, its so good and I love the gem. It's my favourite out of the 2 of them but they are really cool and there is nothing you did wrong.😜 well done.I love how you used sticky words like transparent and treasure they are a good choice I used them in my poem about the gem too. They are pretty cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Mylah. I loved reading your Get NZ Writing poems! My favourite one is the one about the key because it gets my imagination going. I liked the line, 'Sparkly smooth mysterious dust.' You definitely used good 'sticky' words to describe your items from the tin. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteHi Mylah i like the way you set out the lines it looks cool
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