Hi Mylah, Its Hannah here. You have done a great job on your word collector. Your writing has lots of good descriptive words like the fire crackling in the background. Next time maybe you could describe how it feels to be where you wrote this story from.
Hi Mylah, Its Hannah here. You have done a great job on your word collector. Your writing has lots of good descriptive words like the fire crackling in the background. Next time maybe you could describe how it feels to be where you wrote this story from.
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